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Challenging Mission by jackfreak1994 Challenging Mission by jackfreak1994
 So this is my idea of a story, based on my drawing:

During her time at the G.A.C.C. in space, things have been really hard for Lilo. Like back home, she is bullied by other students, and make fun of her whenever she fails at something. Being human, she is at risk of getting severely hurt and Stitch becomes overprotective of her. It is because of this that she is considered weak to her other classmates, and believe that Lilo’s dependency on Stitch will only slow them down and cause serious problems if they were ever on a real mission.

At first, Lilo was devastated that even in space no one seems to accept her and begins to believe that she will never become anything but a failure. Gantu, Reuben, Jumba, and Stitch try their best to keep her hopes up and remind her of all the rescues she has done in the past in hopes of making her realize how amazing she really is. But despite the support, it only makes Lilo doubt herself more, remembering that usually Stitch was the one who rescued and capture the cousins, while she only named and searched for homes they could belong.

Soon, sadness turns to anger, and now all she wanted to do was prove that she can be just as strong as everyone else. She begins to work harder on her studies and training, and whenever Stitch wants to help her she would reject his assistance. Worried, Stitch turns to the Council Woman and Jumba hoping that they can help Lilo. But instead, they believed that it would be better if Stitch let Lilo work things on her own, after all she’s not a little girl anymore who needed protection 24/7, the best thing to do was give her some space. Even if Stitch was against the idea, he reluctantly agrees and decides to avoid Lilo for a little while.

A few days later, while Stitch had been visiting Jumba, Lilo is asked to give an envelope to Stitch when he returned, in which gives instructions of a new mission Stitch is assigned to. It was then that Lilo decided that this could be her chance to prove how good she can be, and hope that succeeding this can finally make everyone else realize that she didn’t need any protection and wasn’t so weak as everyone believed. She decides to take the risk, and before Stitch would find out, she takes the keys to his Red ship and flies away, not realizing she left the envelope in their room.


Meanwhile, without anyone noticing a prisoner named Zardex escapes from his cell room and is seeking revenge on Stitch for capturing him and his gang. He is considered one of the most dangerous ring leaders in the Galaxy. He has been in jail for 3 years, and during those years he began to grow a dark hatred towards Stitch. His one big goal was to kill him, and has attempted many times to escape in order to go through that dream. Now free, he plans to search for him, and attack at the right moment. Once that’s done, he will set all prisoners free, and attack at the unsuspecting Galactic students.

During his escape in the vents, he overhears the advisor informing a young student about Stitch’s new mission. This was the perfect opportunity, and quickly goes in search for a ship. Once he sees Stitch’s red ship take off, he follows close behind and begins shooting it. Since his attack wasn’t expected, he had successfully damage part of Stitch’s ship, causing it to crash to a close by planet. Witnessing the crash, Zardex is convinced that Stitch didn’t survive it, and turns back to continue his next part of the plan, unaware that the one who he believed was Stitch driving the ship, was in fact Lilo, the young human student he saw earlier.


Few hours later, as Stitch was exiting Jumba’s lab he saw many galactic students screaming and running in fear, confused Stitch tries his best to stop some to ask what’s going on. Many of them told him of the prisoners escaping their cells and attacking them. Fearing for Lilo’s safety, Stitch searched and fought his way back to their dormitories in hope of finding her there, but the only thing there was an envelope of a mission assigned to him, and also his keys were missing. Thinking Lilo is waiting for him at the Ship, he hurries to where the ships are located, but before reaching the room, he is attacked by a group of prisoners. Outnumbered, Stitch is easily beaten and handcuffed. He is then taken to their ring leader, Zardex, who is shocked to see that Stitch was alive, He angrily asks how he escaped his death in the crash earlier. Confused Stitch angrily tells him that he has no clue what he is talking about, and demands to know where Lilo was. Realizing that he was speaking of the human, he informs him that he doesn’t have a clue where she is located, that last time he saw her she was at an office, being told about his mission, and after that he quickly went off and followed a red ship, in which he took down.

It was at that moment that Stitch felt the fur behind his back stood, realizing that Lilo must have been the one who was driving his ship the time it was attacked. Nobody but her knew where he hid his keys, she knew about the mission he was assigned, knowing how much she's been wanting to prove herself to others, it would make sense if she'd plan to take his place and go to his ship. As Stitch put the pieces together, it was then that he began to realize that Lilo…was dead.

His best friend, sister, heroine that he loved with all his heart is gone forever, all because he wasn’t there to protect her, like he promised. The anguish he felt of the horrible news was too much for him, and was soon replaced with the thought of vengeance. His destructive program takes over him and begins attacking everyone who got in his way. Before he could even reach his target, Zardex orders every prisoner to attack Stitch. Despite being very strong and dangerous, he was no match against the large group of aliens who were beating him. The last thing they heard before Stitch went unconscious was a whisper of his friend's name, Lilo.


While this was going on, Nobody noticed a small blue ship that was approaching the school. Lilo was alive, and was driving back to school to warn everyone about a mysterious attacker that needs to be caught. When she was attacked, she quickly when out back and escaped on a small emergency ship that had been installed by Jumba not long ago, luckily she was able to escape on time before it crashed. But now that she’s back, she knows automatically that something is not right. and she sneaks around the halls she finds all her classmates locked away in the cells, and the prisoners who were there earlier were missing. As she searches around, she finds Stitch in one of the cells beaten badly, worried and not wanting to leave him she takes him with her and goes off to look for Jumba. She soon realizes that he’s been captured, and that now the prisoners are planning on attacking the Counsel woman. With Stitch unconscious, and all her friends locked away, it is up to Lilo to find a way to save the day.


PHEW!!! that was long, hope you all like my little idea. Sorry for the villain's lousy name, couldn't come up with a good one :P

Lilo and Stitch (C) :iconalohalilo:

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Holy Crap that was awesome! Great story, great drawing and a great idea overall! The villain sounds pretty interesting too, I'd like to see some art of him. I kinda reminds me of some ideas I have for my own L+S series (aside from a creepypasta I'm working on about a possessed Stitch plush that tries to kill a kid (sorry if it seems a bit too dark). I got a lot of great ideas for stories and characters that I think would be great for a franchise like this. If you ever want to talk, please let me know!
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FALLOUTDOG3 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
war never change
BulldozerIvan Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Now I'd pay to see this become a movie.
Akumamika Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I would watch the ever loving hell out of a new series of Lilo and Stitch if this was the setting. Dayum please keep this going. 
toothlesslover365 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wannnnnnnnnnnn what happened to poor little Stitch!?!? No this is so sad but a great drawing but so sad!!
toothlesslover365 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is so sad and so cute poor stitch.
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
patrycja-waszczuk Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Artist
Poor Stitch happy cry XD 
inginuyasha Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
So epic pic ^_^ nice cliffy too
Marcelinemissinyou Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Disney needs to make this a tv show. YOU ARE AWESOME AT THIS! :D
CatDogBiggestFangirl Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
lilo and stitch is a tv show on Disney but it got cancelled
Marcelinemissinyou Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i know, i used to watch it all the time :D What i meant was that they should bring it back where lilo is older, about sixteen and working for the amauda ( sorry if i spelled that wrong)
ShannonAllAround Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
SO EPIC!!! :D That would be an awesome story idea, and totally true to both Stitch's and Lilo's personalities! Great job.
cartoonfan707 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool!
Browniethehedgie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This story is cool!And I love drama!But Stitch has to live!!He won't die again!
KannaAsa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is so good! I can see the pain in her Face and the Mist, the Lights, it all looks perfekt! Clapping Emoticon 

.. but Stitch... Misaki-eyes (Misaki Ayuzawa) 
PrayerGirl1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Okay this is awesome!! I would love to read your story and the pic is really great!!
Ichigooneechan66 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
awww ;w; <3
Omnipotrent Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Tanahamondo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Well done! What a great story outline! My only problem is, is the prison in the same building as the college? Other than that, really well crafted! And the picture is really good too. :)
jackfreak1994 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yes, the college has a prison. Students take their captured villains there to prove their success in their mission. 
Tanahamondo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014

Oh, cool! Thanks for clarifying. :)

bonnieboo0 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is awesome! Great story to it too!
markykong600 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
WTB more
WolfOfTheMoons Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing! Descriptive, interesting, and just plain awesome! Please continue (no rush, btw)!
Iguanagirl Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor stitch.... this something like Scratch would be looking like when he is hurt
DaMushroom Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist

Awesome story there, and I think Zardex is a great name!
startrek89 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Animationobsessed Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Both the art and the story are wonderful!!! :clap: Please continue with the story!! 
bt123456789 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I would've thought of something like this before you XD  I will admit that the story's really good, and very creative, good work :D
stitchfan08steven Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Musicalmutt2 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
what i would give to have this made into an episode, oh my gosh that was so worth the read~! your stories are so creative and the way you draw them looks so realistic- it's absolutely incredible~
Pentical Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
That is a fantastic idea and the picture really shows on Lilo's face how dire the situation is.
matanui2100 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

That is Lilo man for a second I thought that was her older sister Nani

But nice work

Watery-Flame Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoa! That is amazing! Go Lilo!!
Dragonsissiy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Amazing, I love it! The story is great too. I wish they'd realize what a great idea this is and make a series like it.
Invaderskull1995 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lilo looks pretty cool in that suit, Awesome work :),I hope Stitch is alright though.
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